Comment
Issues and Options Document
Representation ID: 35172
Received: 02/03/2018
Respondent: Rayleigh Town Council
Representation Summary:
Paragraph 4.5. The words "we must not over-burden investment in business." are meaningless and make the whole sentence incomprehensible. Delete these and the first word "Whilst" and the sentence makes sense.
Paragraph 4.13. The word "however" occurs twice in one sentence, which is incorrect.
Full text:
Paragraph 4.5. The words "we must not over-burden investment in business." are meaningless and make the whole sentence incomprehensible. Delete these and the first word "Whilst" and the sentence makes sense.
Paragraph 4.13. The word "however" occurs twice in one sentence, which is incorrect.