Comment
Issues and Options Document
Representation ID: 35169
Received: 02/03/2018
Respondent: Rayleigh Town Council
In paragraph 3.3 "The area home to around 3,320 businesses...." the verb "is" is missing.
Paragraph 3.5 "The workplace and resident earnings in the district are below average compared to Essex and the UK." This is not true. It is true for workplace earnings but not for resident weekly earnings which at 670.9 are higher than Essex (594.0) and UK (539). The statement is also inconsistent with the first sentence of the next paragraph "The area is a generally prosperous part of the country,"
In paragraph 3.3 "The area home to around 3,320 businesses...." the verb "is" is missing.
Paragraph 3.5 "The workplace and resident earnings in the district are below average compared to Essex and the UK." This is not true. It is true for workplace earnings but not for resident weekly earnings which at 670.9 are higher than Essex (594.0) and UK (539). The statement is also inconsistent with the first sentence of the next paragraph "The area is a generally prosperous part of the country,"